Here’s my entry for this week’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt challenge. Thanks as always to Rochelle for organizing FF, and to Jennifer for the photo!
“Let’s go!”
Joran stared at the lake, the smoke rising from the opposite shore, the flimsy-looking canoe. He froze.
The fighter pushed him, laughing. “What doncha like—the rock giants, the fire blasts, or the part about not getting no reward?”
Joran berated himself. Now was no time for cowardice. He had worked too hard to prove himself to these two.
The archer followed Joran’s gaze to where it was stuck, deep in the water. She put a hand on Joran’s shoulder. “They need us.”
Magic words.
Joran climbed into the canoe, clenching both sides. “So, how does this work?”
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Nice! I like Joran. He’s not worried about fireblasts or rock giants but deep water is a real issue. Then, knowing someone needs him, he’s willing to face it anyway. That’s a “real” hero. Well done! 🙂
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Thanks! Yes, even brave warriors who fight off horrible monsters with aplomb are usually still scared of something… and the “magic” words to get them past it need not be actual magic, even in a magical world.
But we were just trading puns earlier and you didn’t mention the FLUID in the title? Nudge nudge!
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Eh? As in the fluid battle situation, or the fluid that runs down the leg during extreme fear? 😉
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Well I *was* thinking fluid like the water he’s afraid of, but you bring up some interesting alternatives.
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I have to agree with Eric, this guy is a true hero. He’s willing to jump right into a flimsy canoe that he doesn’t know anything about to go help the others. A true hero and a great story!
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Thanks, Joy! I think he really showed his true colors when the going got tough. I just hope he was wrong about judging that canoe to be flimsy…
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Yes, hopefully it isn’t too flimsy and has some oars! lol
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That is a true fighter – a hero. Fighting your fears is heroism
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Agreed!
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Liked the warrior with vulnerability, nice little story.
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Thanks! I think probably all brave warriors have something that frightens them, that they don’t want to admit.
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I know, just like me. I can be in a sword fight and doesn´t bother me a bit but I see the movie Jerry Macguire and I sob like a little girl…..
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As Mark Twain, courage is the mastery of fear, not the absence of it. Nice reflection on that.
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Thanks Sandra! And I was trying to remember who’d said that. When I searched online after the fact, all I could find was George R.R. Martin’s version in one of his GoT books: “Bran thought about it. ‘Can a man still be brave if he’s afraid?’
‘That is the only time a man can be brave,’ his father told him.” It’s a fine quote, but I knew I’d heard the same concept expressed well before that.
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Good story, I like it.
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Thanks!
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Nice. I liked the comments back and forth, too. As for me, I’m afraid of my wife. But when she needs me, I come running! So I guess I’m a hero, too! 🙂
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I always love the comments too. And whatever you’re afraid of, if your wife thinks you’re a hero, that’s the important part! 😀
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Most time I’m a hero, occasionally a bum. But I suppose that’s in any marriage. 🙂
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Being needed can bring out the hero in some for sure. Nicely done.
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Yes indeed, and in this case, his companion knew just what to say about it. Thanks!
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Bite the bullet and go! Fears be damned!
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Exactly! Sometimes you just need the right push.
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Being needed is the power switch for turning on courage. Great read!
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Thanks! Yes, definitely a motivator, to think you’re doing it for someone else.
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Nice take on the prompt
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When the chips are down, Joran steps up to the plate. Good for him!
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Yay, Joran! But Joran’s getting all the credit in these comments. I feel like I should give a shout out for the archer, who assessed the situation and knew exactly what to say to motivate Joran without embarrassing him about his phobia. Yay, unnamed archer woman!
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Wonderful. Taunting does nothing for him, but when he’s needed, he overcame his fears. I did notice the motivating skill of the archer woman, but you said it already. 🙂
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Thanks. Hm, I didn’t “hear” the fighter taunting him, but yes, I can see that. I was thinking of it more like commiserating, “gee, what’s not to like?” Like coworkers complaining about their jobs, “Well, the work is grueling and the hours are long, but hey, the pay’s lousy too.”
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Oh and thanks for noticing the archer woman too!
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